Luminosity

Vision: You seem to have some really nice ideas all molded into one on this piece. I really enjoy the warmth and the 'luminosity'. Pretty straightforward approach but it looks nice, and simplicity is my favorite. I am not sure that the small planets would stand a chance with that kind of heat that close, so it seems inaccurate to me. Also the sun its self looks a little flat in a couple areas but that is just being very nitpicky.

Originality: I like this piece in particular because there are not very many pieces that show the sun [or a star] in this fashion or in this way. In that respect, it is very original <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/>

Technique: Your technique is great on this piece, the stars fit in well and definitely add rather than take away from the overall luminous idea. Like I said, everything looks good but I am not a fan of the smaller planet.

Impact: This one is very impactful and I really enjoy looking at this one. The soft angelic rays coming out of the star makes this very strong. I would change the size of the smaller planet personally so it doesn't take away from the star. It would help the sense of scale as well.

Deviousness: Keep up the fantastic work man, this one is really great. Better than a lot of the pieces I see out there because of it's technically strong qualities as well as its' simplicity.